Procedure writing

In Te Maunga we have been coming up with ideas for procedure. The thing that I learnt was you need to put the punctuation in the right place also I learnt how to finish it with all the things in the right place. I think the thing that helped me was the workshops and my friends giving me advice. I think that I still need to work on using more punctuation, and I need to make my procedure have a hook to make it interesting.