My Holiday

W.A.L.T. write a recount using language features.

 My Holiday
 On Monday at 8 o'clock in the morning, I went to my friends house with my other friend and we went inside seat away because I was cooled. She want for me to came over because… She was going to her Dad's house and she wanted to spend time with me. When I was at her house we made some slime out of condenser and cornflour with blue food coloring and I ask if we can make heaps? After we went for a swim in Bay of Islands College pools it was shivering cold but then I started to have fun when we had to go somewhere in Paihia! When we got in Paihia we went to the place where you get some things for $ 5.00 or $ 10.00 in one shop. The thing that I got was a piece of soap that is like cup cake with a flowers on top, it was as cool as a cooled pool. I think that was a best holiday that I had in years!